Yes
by admin on Feb.05, 2010, under Thoughts on Then
Brilliance but I’m dumb and blind
Lost in the light I cannot find
The solitude of your heart
The depth of beautiful eyes
Silence but I am waiting
Praying for, I fear saying
The words that I feel
The words that make you
Romance but I’m taken
Trembling I awaken
My love for you ignites
Your short answer invites
February 8th, 2010 on 3:01 pm
“The words that make you” it’s cool because you feel like there should be more to that line, but then there isn’t. It’s just the words that make you, not the words that make you _____. And I like it.
The overall poem is very simple but not in the boring way. I like how the first line of each stanza has the same structure. I like the cleverness of the title. I like “the solitude of your heart”
I like it